Lockers of Man (48mb, requires QuickTime 7 to watch) is my first film shot on 16mm!  Filmmaking is tough and I am glad to say that except one shot, all the other ones are in focus.  Thanks so much to Kiara, Dechen, and the actors so I pulled this one off.  I also think the story is more comprehensive and this does feel like a short.  I would appreciate any feedback as I really want to submit to some obscure film fests.